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2009-11-14

Bad first line


A Taliban suicide bomber struck for the third time in three days in Pakistan's volatile Northwest Frontier Province.

Wait a minute. Either either these suicide bombers are very bad at their job, or very good. Well, that or the person writing the line should have written something like "A Taliban suicide bomber attack struck for the third time in three days ..." You know the gaff is bad when I'm trying to correct your writing.

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